Quote Originally Posted by Turbolag View Post
If you feel up to it, maybe proof read my content before I submit it and offer suggestions ?

In return, I can post a link to this website on my website to help get more traffic here.

And no I'm not saying it "needs" more traffic. Just saying, it can help get more. Not that it needs more or doesn't have enough.
Have you taken any writing classes? IMO, you need much more assistance than simple proof reading can provide.

First thing you should do is know what you're writing about so that you can give solid advice.