Cover Letter Help

[cinda]

I'll have my wife look at it soon (she does stuff like this for a living).

One thing I can tell you is that a cover letter shouldn't be a re-hash of your resume. Talk more about why you chose the company, not why the company should choose you. People will see the resume anyways so why state things twice.

spiffy

I agree that is not exactly what a cover letter is suppose to read like too much information on what they all ready know about themselves. It suppose to be a synopsis of your resume with a splash of creativity importing some of your personality. But I am pretty old and times have changed lets see what his wife says. You have some grammatical errors too and if I see them you know there must be more. This room use to be very good at picking up errors.
Good luck it sounds like fun!