*NEW LINE* Pride Cigars

[MarineOne]

I respect what you stated, however I was being facetious about everyone raving. Since we are in Tampa, people at the local lounges are enjoying the blend. If you were in the states we would request you to go to your local lounge and request it.

Also I apologize for my mis-spelled word.

-Steve

Misspelled words are one thing (misspelled, not mis-spelled), but the grammar is killing me so I'll fix it.

Hey there I'm Steve Tabak, Marketing Director and Regional Sales Manager in FL for Pride Cigars. I want to thank you first for allowing me to be here in Cigarsmoker's discussion board.(1)

I want to tell about our new blend which has everyone here in Florida raving. Our tobacco,(2) which is grown in(3) Santiago, Dominican Republic(4), is 100% Cuban(5) seed tobacco. What makes our tobacco special is the triple fermentation(6) process, which is done only once or twice in competitors' manufacturing process(7). We were at the trade show(8) in August 2009 releasing our label and received a nice response from the lounges. Now its your turn to give us your feedback. Please visit our site, Pride Cigars(9), to see how we got started and to see the blends in which we carry. If you are out of the state of Florida(10), I am more than happy to direct your lounge to your area's sales rep(11) to get Pride Cigars in your shop. You may contact me at our website for questions.

Thank you for your time in reading and look forward to being in your lounge one day.(12)

Sincerely,
Steve Tabak
Pride Cigars

(1) New paragraph.
(2) Comma needed.
(3) You don't grow tobacco in a factory, you grow it in the fields AT the factory.
(4) Spelled out the country name and added a comma.
(5) Capitilized "Cuban".
(6) Misspelled "fermentation".
(7) Fixed nonsensical sentence.
(8) Which trade show?
(9) Fixed link and embedded it in the text.
(10) Spelled Florida.
(11) Fixed another nonsensical sentences.
(12) Another new paragraph.

And yes, I have had my coffee today. Tip your waitress and try the veal.