*NEW LINE* Pride Cigars

[heftysmokes]

Misspelled words are one thing (misspelled, not mis-spelled), but the grammar is killing me so I'll fix it.







(1) New paragraph.
(2) Comma needed.
(3) You don't grow tobacco in a factory, you grow it in the fields AT the factory.
(4) Spelled out the country name and added a comma.
(5) Capitilized "Cuban".
(6) Misspelled "fermentation".
(7) Fixed nonsensical sentence.
(8) Which trade show?
(9) Fixed link and embedded it in the text.
(10) Spelled Florida.
(11) Fixed another nonsensical sentences.
(12) Another new paragraph.

And yes, I have had my coffee today. Tip your waitress and try the veal.

Nice work. Try to get your own shit right if you're going to pick someone else's apart.

Another--singular. Sentences--not.

[MarineOne]

Nice work. Try to get your own shit right if you're going to pick someone else's apart.

Another--singular. Sentences--not.

LMAO, nice catch. I should have proofed it better but the spellcheck came back as okay (a first in my book) and I just hit submit while I was on the phone.

And man that spellcheck really is a nice feature. This is the first site that I've seen that has one.



-K

[Craigers]

I completely agree with ggiese.

After reading your sales pitch I'm not feeling convinced enough to go out of my way to buy your cigars. But after reading some of the reviews posted here by trusted members I find myself actively looking for the cigars. A great review by someone that has earned respect here will go much, much further than any sales pitch.

So like ggiese said, send out a free sample to some of the established members here and maybe they will do a review for you.