*NEW LINE* Pride Cigars

[heftysmokes]

Misspelled words are one thing (misspelled, not mis-spelled), but the grammar is killing me so I'll fix it.







(1) New paragraph.
(2) Comma needed.
(3) You don't grow tobacco in a factory, you grow it in the fields AT the factory.
(4) Spelled out the country name and added a comma.
(5) Capitilized "Cuban".
(6) Misspelled "fermentation".
(7) Fixed nonsensical sentence.
(8) Which trade show?
(9) Fixed link and embedded it in the text.
(10) Spelled Florida.
(11) Fixed another nonsensical sentences.
(12) Another new paragraph.

And yes, I have had my coffee today. Tip your waitress and try the veal.

Nice work. Try to get your own shit right if you're going to pick someone else's apart.

Another--singular. Sentences--not.