Thanks for the laugh.. But it made my cough come back pretty harsh.
Thanks for the laugh.. But it made my cough come back pretty harsh.
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Just run everything threw a spell checker.
Smuggling? This is where the age old question cellophane off or cellophane on could be answered easily. By the way are you related to swims with fishes?![]()
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choose it, and the strength
to make it endure
Ok what is or are some good beginner smokes I will find in Mexico? What should I do about bringing some LEGAL smokes back since I don't have a humidor?
1. I'm
2. Cancun and Mexico should be capitalized.
3. Try changing "was going to bring" to "am planning on bringing".
4. Don't
5. The "spend a ton because.." sentence sucks. Re-word that completely.
6. "I have smoked"
7. Comma after before
8. too much
9. Starting a sentence with "Anyways" is what 14 year old girls do.
10. Comma after Also
11. Delete the second use of "also"
12. Capitalize "Thanks"
13. your
14. Comma after OK.
15. OK is spelled OK, not Ok.
16. "what is or are some" is horrible. Change that to "what are some".
17. "smokes that I will find" sounds better to me.
18. You probably should change "will find" to "could find".
Carry on.
-Buzz
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