Quote Originally Posted by Dolphinswin10 View Post
Hey guys Im new here. Im 18, and have never even puffed a single cigar. Im traveling to cancun mexico in march and was going to bring a few cigars back. I dont have a humidor but i plan on getting a humi pouch or something to preserve them for a while. I dont want to spend a ton because who knows if I will even like them. Are they addictive? I have smoke marijuana before but not to much. Anyways any tips for a first cigar or anything would be great. Also any ideas to smuggle cigars in would be appreciated also. thanks for you help.
1. I'm
2. Cancun and Mexico should be capitalized.
3. Try changing "was going to bring" to "am planning on bringing".
4. Don't
5. The "spend a ton because.." sentence sucks. Re-word that completely.
6. "I have smoked"
7. Comma after before
8. too much
9. Starting a sentence with "Anyways" is what 14 year old girls do.
10. Comma after Also
11. Delete the second use of "also"
12. Capitalize "Thanks"
13. your

Quote Originally Posted by Dolphinswin10 View Post
Ok what is or are some good beginner smokes I will find in Mexico? What should I do about bringing some LEGAL smokes back since I don't have a humidor?
14. Comma after OK.
15. OK is spelled OK, not Ok.
16. "what is or are some" is horrible. Change that to "what are some".
17. "smokes that I will find" sounds better to me.
18. You probably should change "will find" to "could find".

Carry on.

-Buzz